mark at kingant.net
Tue Dec 19 02:39:58 EST 2006
There's a lot of good stuff in there, nice job.
I like proposal 1 A LOT. Especially the text--it's very playful, easy to
read, and not intimidating. The pigeon in proposal 1 is good. I wonder if
it's possible to make it appear more pigeon-like? Maybe smaller wings? Or
less curvy wings? Right now it reminds me a bit of a chicken flapping it's
wings. Or a phoenix. And I'd be curious to see maybe a deeper, more royal
shade of purple mixed in, too.
The emblem in proposal 3 is also really great. It has a more profesional feel
to me than the emblem in proposal 1. I'm not sure I like how circular it
is... it seems like it would be more memorable if it was more life-like and
less constrained. I guess we'll have to figure out if we'd rather have a
playful or professional logo (I definitely prefer playful).
Proposal 2 doesn't do much for me... it's a bit difficult to read at a quick
glance, and hard to discern the pigeon without looking at it for a few seconds.
The images in the middle of your "Futher experiments" heading seem the most
pigeon-like to me.
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